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Words cannot express
The feelings or emotions
That hurricane inside me
Every passing second
Nothing ever satisfies
Me ir my peers
I am not perfect
But I am not flawed
I am broken
But they don't know it
Masked in laughter
And in hatred
Scare away
Who might understand
No one to discuss with
Parents join the clan
Tough outer exterior
Weak and trembling inside
Maybe I should just leave
With no hello-goodbye
It's not like they would care
They'd laugh at my dismay
I should disappear
Not return again
I'm not worth the time
No one will put in
I am not perfect
But I am not flawed
I am nothing
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:iconmorpheus1035:
Morpheus1035 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I have depression, and I know how you feel. You can note me if you want to talk.
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Karda4124 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Nice work.

Good emotion.

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:iconfourgirls919:
fourgirls919 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013
Is there troubles going on?
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:icontargetgirl:
TargetGirl Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

Maybe

Maybe not

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:iconfourgirls919:
fourgirls919 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013
I can tell there is bro, be real with me, what's going on in your life? Are you okay?
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:icontargetgirl:
TargetGirl Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Not really something I want to talk to strangers about...
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:iconfourgirls919:
fourgirls919 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013
Alright then, I understand.
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:iconwwizzard:
wwizzard Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Student General Artist
y u make me feels? .........
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:icontargetgirl:
TargetGirl Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

BeCause I need to vent

And I can apparently hide the message in my poetry real fucking well

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:iconwwizzard:
wwizzard Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Student General Artist
:(  i know you're venting...

:hug: 


feel better soon... i don't like it when you're angry....
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:icontargetgirl:
TargetGirl Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

This isn't anger... Really...

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:iconwwizzard:
wwizzard Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Student General Artist
:/ 

just... still.. stop it and be happy. now. 
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:icontargetgirl:
TargetGirl Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

I can't just stop...

These thoughts will just come back

 

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:iconwwizzard:
wwizzard Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Student General Artist
you must be happy. NOW! 
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:icontargetgirl:
TargetGirl Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

Z

Please

Don't be like that

I really am having a problem

and since you obviously didn't get the message in the poem, the leaving part is DYING

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:iconnightshade-warroir:
Nightshade-warroir Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Student General Artist
wow you wrote this?
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:icontargetgirl:
TargetGirl Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah
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:iconnightshade-warroir:
Nightshade-warroir Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Student General Artist
while it is sad its very well written
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:icontargetgirl:
TargetGirl Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks
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:iconnightshade-warroir:
Nightshade-warroir Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Student General Artist
your welcome!
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